listening....

beat is hot.....

para ure voice sounds a lil robotic..the only thing I could just suggest is work on the emotion on that because itll put fluctuations in youre voice....presence is kl...flow is getting much better...but the robotic shit u gotta work on..every1 has that prolem...haveing emotion is not to sound like a derranged nigga..its jus changing ure voice shit so u can give a fresh vibe....lyrics are nice

The next guy, Snypa prety nice...flow is nice...quality is nice..add some more lows on that..lyrics are koo...keep it goin there...work on delivery

The third guy..same thing as paranoid a lil worse u have bad pronounciation i have dat a lil too..and its a bit robotic...it sounds ure foreign..are you?..if so I understand...anyways keep it up..holla..1

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