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Old 02-04-06, 09:27 PM   #10
DaTrusHurtz
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I'm 12 inches long. Ask your girl, she know what I'm about
I ain't talkin' bout abusin' hot's girls, when I say I'll put a foot in her mouth
This line was terrible
So yo.... Brace yourself....... cuz you're soon to be knocked
You might have your key to victory...
...................................... but your door of oppurtunity's locked!
okay, but played
It ain't all about the seeds, but they could also provide a fact
Cuz when I put 3 over 2, you'll see I've more than one this match
Really corny, no punch to this
So small-minded, it keeps shrinkin'. Damn, this dude is shit
This kid's out of his mind....
.......................................and I don't blame him for losing it!
alright i guess
Hot's like a doulble-headed coin, bring either one, you kno I'll rip them
I'm sorry, am I on your bad side? I couldn't tell the difference
not really a harsh diss
I'll come shootin' at his head with fire, makin' this fucka duck
I don't need to be cool to get rid of Hot, whether...
.................................................. it's with jabs or uppercuts!
not a diss really, just a statement
Hot knows he bout to get ripped, but he sticks around and tends to fight
But you don't need to be a streaker, for us to see that your ends in sight
lol, i laughed, but this is still not a harsh punch
You can't seem to get past this round, you're always trippin' on your laces
You must be feelin' pissy...
................................. the way urinal of the wrong places!
I seen this shit before, yuck
You're too full of yourself, I'm jus waitin' for your carton to spill
Your rhymes are point-less, so it's time you sharpen your skill
pointless shit is played
My punches be straight killers, ain't no way you testin' these
I'ma lay this kid flat out...
.....................................N watch Tava-rez in peace!
okay wordplay, you could have made a good punch out of this, but ya used it wrong
I'm so far ahead, watch as I easily put this kid to waste
It's plain to see he needs to ketchup, so watch as Hot dog's out this race
again, okay wordplay, but no punch to this
Watch as the seats be fillin', as I'll leave hot ripped and done
Cuz my rap success is buildin'...
................................ so I'll jus knock him off of one!
seen lines similar to this one, also not really a punch
You keep thinkin' that you'll win... BULLSHIT!! You know you're cursed
You need to get your mind out of the gutter, and while you're there, pick up your verse
very stretched, needed rewording... kinda played but okay
Nobody knows about this shit here, yo but I ain't playin' dude
I'ma peace out this puzzle...
.....................................while that's jus what KORV saying to you!
no punch to this

vs.

I run this tourney pussy...me cursed? only when Im swearing at clowns
Cuz I address the situation....... You just wear it around
address shit is played, but ya used it well
Im done chatting dog........... Now I'm only use AIM to Shoot far
Regardless of rank I'll be knocking down "3"'s like foreign Hoop stars
no punch to this
Its clear he dont get chicks, so he dont need no lectures on love
Last time he hit 2nd...... he gave in to peer pressure on drugs
smokin' shit is played and hitting bases is played, but actually the way ya used this concept was quite nice
Obessed with jizz cuz you was a mistake Baby, you Bastard
Wack enough to take Mass off the map faster than Lazy Pastors
Similies just aren't that harsh
And get a fucking job kid..... we know the big crib is just a Front, Be
Cuz if you owned this site ya parents would hafta pay the Mortgage monthly
Needs rewording but not bad
Fuck it bitch I might drive to your crib you'll get whored on your Court
but for now...Ill take ESPY off the stage faster than Awards in Sports
also needs rewording but not bad
I dont like abusing washed up vets....whose better days came and went
Bu t I'll be sure to beat the case....If charged with Reckless Endangerment
pretty played
I'm winning this...and Spul can never say I cheated for wealth.......
Its sad when you gotta stoop to levels as low as beating yourself (7 times? damn dog)
If there's wordplay in this, I just don't get it
Didnt you win the 1st tourney? yeah but now this bitch is dead and lame
How UMASS so many losses since then...........
........................The college team's hanging its head in shame
ah man, this concept is ill, but you fucked it up. Still okay though
You've got that fucking MA style......which says alot on the Mic
Cuz the biggest rapper where YOU from.....wrestles on Monday nights
okay attempt for a personal, but isn't that harsh really
Sorry bitch, You cant see me <--- wait aint that what ya boy John Cena said?
So I'ma bodyslam ya little brother........On the padding between ya legs
just too basic and nothing harsh really
Plus I downloaded ya shit.... listened to it and I wasnt Convinced
So I took a Commercial Break from it........thats lasted ever since
good concept, not worded that great... if you had said like "Why does it seem Commercial breaks from it seem to last forever?" just hits harder
That shit aint worth coping, find a garbage man---Confess to his ass
And Im sure your shit'll be Outstanding...............
..............................In a pile with the Rest of the trash
outstanding shit is very played, sorry
And only two can make the final trip so be expecting your doom
Cuz threes a crowd.......that only cheers when you exit the room
pretty decent

Hmm, here's the way I see it. Spul, I haven't read your stuff before really so I don't know if this is your usual style. Sorry if my criticism of your stuff was so harsh, if someone likes your style I could see them enjoying your verse, but I just felt like your verse was corny and like I was reading off a joke site. Hell, you probably got some of your shit off of a joke site. To me, rap battling is more about being harsh than funny and your shit wasn't harsh. I've also seen almost every line you used before.

Hotshh, you were very inconsistent. You had some tight concepts like the Umass one, the closer was okay though I've used something similar to it before, commercial shit was okay, mortgage line okay, rest was kinda played, guess you just hadn't seen them before but yea i have.

This battle I think could be close, depends on what kinda verse you like. I felt Hotshh!'s verse was pretty average, some nice shit and some eh shit, and spul just came with a lot of corny jokes.

Vote - Hotshh!
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