*listening*

First thing that I noticed was the vast difference in the quality and volume of the two vocals. The add libs by the chief on the first verse was really getting annoying. It was too much. It's cool to do the add libs on a verse separate than your own, but you were saying too much and it was taking away from the dude's verse. One mic.....your flow is robotic, which isn't good. It's monotone, which means every word pretty much sounds the same....the same volume, the same emotion, the same inflection, etc. It makes your verse sound boring. Lyrics were alright, but nothing to write home about. Chief, your verse was a little better, but you started getting the same monotonous voice as One Mic did. I don't know if it's the slow beat that is drawing it out from you guys, but it's really not appealing. Chief, your quality was better than One Mic's as well as your flow and lyrical content, but this is far from a ten for either one of you guys......

Just some constructive feedback, hope you guys use it ™

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221281

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