Beat's alright for a radio intro. You sounded like you were stopping after every line in the beginning.......not good. I thought you stayed on topic pretty well. Don't think your voice is that good on this type of track, but what do I know. I already told you before that I thought it was way too long for a radio intro, but you said that was what he asked for, so I'll keep my mouth shut..........™

It really wasn't that bad at all and I can picture it on a radio show, so I guess you made what the dude was looking for......congrats....

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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221281

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