lol........Fresh Azimiz
Anyway, I don't like that beat that much cause it makes you spit a little slow. You flowed alright, not too much complaints there. You had some alright lyrics too. Your hooks seem to always need some help. Don't worry though.....I had the same exact problem. Just experiment with new ways to make it sound more like a hook......you seem to be pretty decent, but your quality is what is holding you back. Read a tutorial or two or buy some better equipment......that's all I can say about that.
RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221281