UNF.....when you came in, you were a little off beat, but then you picked it up. You seem to do well on these slow beats. It does well for your accent cause we can understand your words a little better. Hook is horribly in need of help. Your quality definitely needs to be raised like ten notches. Go read my tutorial man.....I really think it can help you out....
Limited.....you came in pretty nice. Your quality is pretty good on this track. I liked the "they better fuckin prove it" line. You stayed on beat pretty well too.
Good track overall though.....just up the quality UNF
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