*listening*

Beat sounds cool so far.......you had the right volume level for that intro part, but then you had the same low volume for your verse. I'm not really feeling the flow too much....it's pretty basic. Hook was pretty nice. I can't tell if the quality was there because you had the vocals too low.....but it sounds alright. You need some more presence too......you seem to be just talking like you don't even believe what you are talking about.....what I like to do is act like I'm angry at the mic when I spit....it helps get you in the right mood....lol

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221281

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