I like that beat......but it didn't really match your style. I never thought a hype flow could be monotonous, but you seemed to do it.....lol. Try to throw some inflection in your voice at parts so it keeps people intrested. You fell off beat a couple times, but not bad for the most part. You could use a little help on the quality too.....read a tutorial or two......they help a lot
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