Your accent is really fucking thick man......
I'm not really feeling your flow on this one. You need to learn how to relax your accent a little. I'm not telling you to sell out and fake another accent....I'm just saying, for us to understand you better, you might want to speak a little more clearly. Your quality could use a little polishing as well.....
RTF
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