lol......intro was pretty funny.

Wow......this is pretty bad.....and not bad meaning good. You have no presence at all man. Act like you actually believe what you are saying so we will. The whole phone shit wasn't really working cause they were pretty off beat. I guess it's kinda funny, but it might not be funny in the way you want it to be funny. The second verse was a little better than the first. Actually, a lot better. It had flow and the presence was better. Still not dope, but better.....lol. Same with the third verse (as the second)

RTF
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221281

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