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Tech's verse was pretty abstract and it was difficult to get into it and see where he was going with it. I thought he did a good job with his flow structure and vocab, but the concept its self needed work...
Sabre's was unbelievable. Great structure, great choice of words, great comparison and a great way to close it off. The imagery and emotion was well felt and although this was a short piece, it delivered a message nicely. This piece really captivated me.
Good work both but I have to
v/ Sabre
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