Mimesis' VERSE

Ill be the one to step first.. your check in shows me youll be left herb
Cause I may bite the dust.. but I'll leave you digesting whole deserts
>not bad
Haven't heard of this dude.. easy rounds, now I'ma be murdering you
Had byes to the Final Four..
..so it's only fitting you get one from the tournament to
good line (1)
Ha, I'm riled and pumped.. your fake, queer.. be sure to smile you punk
While I shit on John's.. you just been biting Hensley's style for months
>cool line
Here's a follow up... with this beating you should start studying health
You can't get anywhere.. executing a style worse then somebody else
When you spit its the worst.. know that Im going to be kicking you first
Put so many Fractures on your face.. you'll start forming it into a verse
>nice line
You queer..
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..I've been doing this for two years, you ain't handling this..
The only time you leave vets bloody is takin care of hurt animals, bitch
>wow, thats hurting....olllld stuff man
Here's the real talk.. I ghosted for Apostrophe.. but still keeping it cool
Because you only exposed the shit to stop him from BEATING YOU TOO
>well yeah, apo wasn't even writing....which makes it automatic for JTR....i dont see the punch
Sometimes I do go over the top.. making sure opponents'll turn and roll
But you have to hack accounts just to compile a few decent personals
>because apparantly one of the best text heads is writing for 2 accounts
Just freeing the facts.. A-Z is where I reside.. always beating the wack
While A-Z is the list of letters that wuld rather not be seen in your raps
>haha, not bad (2)
Ya must not be steppin to fight.. just know that I'll be repping this right
And Reign over you so much, we'll see Lil Cali turn into a vet on the site
> blah
You stepped, why?... I changed from boy to man.. trying to wreck guys
While boy to man is just another avid description of your fucking sex life
>played shit right here man
JTR's Picture..
JTR's Abs..
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..What the fuck is that, you ugly peice of shit.. you aren't rocking dudes
Because gravity holds us all down.. but it's actually close to droppin you
>nah, not feeling it
That's PATHETIC, but I see that backround, know youll get smacked son
Your such a corn hopper you had to go skydiving to get off your last one
>ehh, worded poor
I'm murdering you.. hurting you.. just believe that you shouldn't rap, guy
So damn close to death, when you landed.. parts of the fucking grass die
>haha, this was good (3)
And on to that second picture.. questions arised, for now, just hold the L
Like,
..Why the fuck are you posting pictures of your body on site full of males
>didn't rhyme, and its a played fact
But let me continue.. ya verses are shitty, and now I'm smelling somethin
My verse Rex.. so Ill just add another crater that you call your bellybuton
>uhh, didn't really connect, sorry man
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Fuck what you've got to say fool.. youre losing, and obviously lame dude
Because in Theory I'd beat you.. but I can take you under this name too
>nice personal (4)
Faggot, I tag team bitches.. leaving them whining.. but it's still sad.. see
...Because you only whined like a bitch when I beat you in the Tag Team
>cool
You know it's true... and with PLL... you did take the title with pride now
Cause you champed it..
..after all the good people stopped caring or signed out
>nice (5)
CONGRATULATIONS! And here's a follow up.. you shouldn't even try herb
You couldn't even win the Champ Match without grabbing 9th's lines first
>haha, true, but obvious
I did see your thread in LL.. I did read those pms.. and it's really sad, kid
..You're trying to diss the SAME PERSON you were begging to collab with
>okay
How do you expect to win? Ya lost to 9th and ain't gonna own me neither
Though I would say you'd have a chance if you bit..
..but you didn't win the last KORV either
>he didn't bite last KORV...i unno, just didn't work
I get cock blocks.. wantin to bang chicks, but they getting a scared face
While you get cock blocks too... when 16 of them form in a square shape
>tried too hard
That aint even it.. with the RVS I do know I will be screwing ya worse kid
Cause you called us the Philbins..
..just to mimick what we do with your verses
>eh, good idea...but how many people are named Phil...really...
Ive seen your outside hobbies.. I know I'm going to have to ruin the stats
So you better continue training because judo....n't have any future in rap
>not bad
That aint even it.. but Ill give you some free shots, as I like keeping it fair
Cause I dont like to box.. but nobody can stop me from beatin this square
>good shit
Garbage.. I saw you squad up with that group, and it's worse then cheatin
..Only joined that french crew because nobody likes your verses in English
>meh
Hensley, Fracture, Lama.. people you jack shit from, and it's nothing dude
You aren't ^ overdose cats.. but that's what we're hoping you'll up and do
>nah, not effective

JTR Battling Himself..
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You didn't think I knew that shit?.. Man, just know I'ma be handin ya hell
I did think you were Master Minded.. until you got caught battlin yourself
>good perosnal (6)
That shit is weak as fuck.. now theres no chance youll be beating me kid
Cause my punches are innaVader's.. while your just stuck eating my fists
>not that effective
You seeing this shit? Headgames? That sounds homo and this whores gay
Even some damn golfers are trying to get away from that fucking foreplay
>nice line (7)
That's 3 out of four names banned.. sad shit, and so I'ma wreck your spit
You pulled the cheating card.. when you still got a whole deck of the shit
>didn't work for me
Don't stand a fucking chance.. you suck, so know I'ma be wreckin ya first
Wackness is so Thoreau..
..Voters'll think they're reading Transcendentalist work
>meh, not that good
And you know it's the realness.. so just believe that this mine to take, kid
Yu dont need to go off on tangents to show you got no sine of greatness
>nice wordplay, i liked it (8)
It's like the Matrix.. when I step its like how Neo fights.. just beating guys
While when you decide to step up.. we all find out you're just a neophyte
>nah, pretty lame attempt
Here's a follow up.. that movie and your ranking.. ready to just run heads
Because I'm a machine.. so it's pretty dam obvious I'll leave this one dead
>blah
I seen that girl you were talking about.. and now I know that I will be fine
But HOW THE FUCK you need 6 dudes to tell you to bang a chick..
..and then still deny
>ehhh, worded bad

HeyKalashkinov: oh yeah, fuck you.
HeyKalashkinov: FAGGOT. YOU FUCKING FAGGOT.
Jaw Show Awe: word.

Let me rephrase this though... that shit is crazy.. but honestly dude, quit
Because how am I supposed to call you gay... when you'd just admit to it
>not bad, nothing special
You fucking fag.. you only picking up Washington's so just stand n' admire
This may be your Training Day..
..but nothing'll stop me from leaving this Man on Fire
>set up didn't connect, sorry man
Believe it's true.. I will be beating you, just hurting guys like a rapping star
An R ally.. is just going to get run the fuck oehver by my personalized Nascar
>ehh, didn't feel it
It's real, fag.. and let me just say this shit again.. cause you will lose hoe
People'll say "Vote - R.. IP" when I ask what should be on your tombstone
>haha, cool (9) creative
Let me say something.. Nobody predicts you to win.. so hide your rhymes
I mean, even ESPN is banking on voters wantin to read Outside The Lines
>uhmm, not really that cool'
...You're getting DESTROYED.. can't pop shit until you talk to your father
And I can't rock your boat.. cause that shits more like a condom in water
>not bad
It's finally over for you... a little advice.. try your best to learn to rap shit
Red gave me this match... just so we could watch your Bull burn to ashes
>cool (10)


JTR's VERSE

Damn this fag is ugly, almost stopped my fuckin heartbeat
It looks like ya hair was skribbled onto ya head with a fuckin sharpie!
>nice (1)
Dawg please, you're wack, I just extract the facts
And could be very cheeky, just by saying your face is exactly that
>cool
Cheek bones swolen like mad, ya weak, it's true bitch
I'd beat ya ass, but it looks like someone already beat me to it
>i laughed (2)

Jaw Show Awe: I just wanna ask you a question
Jaw Show Awe: Does it not look like he has ears on the back of his neck?
Suomran Exid: *holds in laughter & takes deep breaths* No, it dosn't

You're left ruined like ya face, I dont give wacks respect
And EVERYBODY talks about you behind ya back
...cuz you got ears on the back of your neck
>haha, i laughed (3)
Dudes a bloody wreck, i'll make him bloodier, bring the pain here
'Course ya nose is already redder then Rudolphs, and ya still can't reindeer
>cool
I've slain queers, try n' see me, end up the next grunt ta' die
Or I could blind you, just by holding a string infront of ya eyes
>ehh
Guy, i'm telling ya, you're scrawny, & that's truth bitch
I'd say this shrimp has a pencil neck
...but that shit looks more like a tooth-pick
>lol (4)
I'm ruthless, these punches leave you delirous with a few scars
Fuck ya ugly shirt, fuck ya ugly hair, fuck ya ugly... no seriously, you are
>nah

Quote:
Originally Posted by Mimesis
I have a little surprise for you, son..

Fucking retard, you got me? nah, i'll still tear this bum apart
Cuz you didn't surprise shit, dude, I knew you were a bitch from the start
>average
You act hard, but i'll still leave you to rot queer
They say a good daedal go a long way, so i'm wondering how you got here
>nah
STFU like your crew, or I could beat ya mouth 'til you can't talk
Knew this model pose a like a bitch, so it's only right I make this cat-walk
>okay
Ya crews soft, a bunch of easy to rip bitches, you suck homie
I could dissmemeber ya crew
...just by saying fuck apo, fuck hopesfall, and fuck sobe
>haha, nice (5)
You're out of luck, cheat, no one respects this whore
Pulls bitchmoves like an ass, but I still rectum more
>meh
Ya left in gore, the best? dude you're average, you got that?
Calling you dope would be such a big Kid,man
...you'd swear nicole got fat
>haha, i laughed (6)
Just rot fast, dude you're fucking wack, no skills n'
I'll lay him on the floor like a turkish rug when I kilim
>wasn't feeling it
You're still a wimp, i'll kick your ass, it's true bitch
I get a surgeon rip hoes
...while you just have one operating on you after I do it
>not bad
You're through kid, and chances are long gone
You could cook chinese food and still wouldn't have wonton
>uggh, nice idea
Stop riding my long john, faggot, ya gang bangs shock
Like the capitol of thailand, you just Bangkok
>not bad
I hang lots, and beat the shit outta faggots, I know you heard of me
I'll woop ya so bad, in order to save face, you'll need constructive surgeory
>not bad
Taking the win like burglary, kicking his chest so this hoe may break
Cuz killing a bitch is so Simp,son they'll re-open the OJ case
>ehh, heard it before
I'll wreck her face, you're better to head for the fence and bolt
Cuz i'll just steeler win, like Pittsburgh did against the colts
>haha, red bull knows...good shit (7)
You got some faults, what's true is you won't advance
Your wins will come to a Holt, but you aint the St.Louis Rams
>nice
Damn you're ugly as hell, man you know it's still true
Pittsburgh is predicted to win the superbowl, but Bettis you'll lose
>cool wordplay
The truth, you're future is looking quite shady bud
I'll squish this chick like an insect when this lady-bugs
>not bad
I'm hating ya, just cuz you're like wack evolved
Man, i'm bacon ya, with no pig fat involved
>cool
Faggot, this'll be over fast, i'll stomp this vet
You're Dunn so quick, Atlanta will take that as a compliment
>hahhahaha, nice, the way i feel (8)
Get sent away, 88 lines, well that's Degrees fault
I'm bent on kicking your ass, you're bent as the result
>nice
For the championship, you're gone, and I bet I'm around still
The way ya only Windu to cheating
...could get mace kicked off the Jedi council
>creative as hell, nice (9)
Ya, so your rid the mods dick this tourney, why boast fag?
You Leia bitch on the bed and chewbacca little more then most fags
>nice fuckig wordplay, goes well with line before (10)

Asking me on aim where you can go to box and shit, the fuck you so eager to get knocked out for? And dissing my girl, shit i'd diss yours, but you aint ever had to rip on anyways.

And if anything, you bit MY STYLE, using my shit to diss me?
You've been using my style so long, it's no wonder all ya lines miss me
>eh
You're history, muh fucka, you know it's true fruit
You stupid, gay, wack, i'll put my timbs in ya face & make ya ugly to boot
>eh
Talking 'bout boxing, you'd step in the ring and die son
You only take a loss, so go ahead and bite, ya still won't Tyson
>good wordplay
Ya, I got here by bye's son, this is still a wrap, it's ova
Cuz if you wanted to take this Winfrey, you'd have to kidnap Oprah
>loved this line (11)
And you ever even spoken to a girl, not one relationship
but losings a bitch, oh, my bad, that makes one you're aquinted with
>nice line (12)
And you rep NY, but live in Phoenix, and jelous cuz ya abs small
Man, this dude is a comp-poser, with no orchestra at all
>seen it
Ya, run away, man, just hide cuz i'm sick
We'll see your hopesfall... follow you into more threads and ride ya dick
>nice personal
You aint slick, boxing, basketball, stop trying to be me, I know it's sad...
...But dude, you aint Jack, and I say that knowing you wanna be me so bad
>okay
And what's up with brining my girl into this, trying to diss her
For that, if I don't fuck you up in this battle
...i'll just fuck up your sister
>meh
What's with her? She's 18 telling me she's 15, I want more sir
Aint nothing scary 'bout me macking, but I still horror
>ehh, just wordplay
And this dude whines I went past the deadline, just more fus
You aint have to have a Russian name to know that you Borus
>lmfao (13)
My lines would kill yours, and you wanna be boasting at first
Why the fuck do you think Apostrophe didn't bother posting the verse
>hehe
Ya, get screwed, actually get nailed back
Cuz you blow hoe, and I aint talking 'bout a whales back
>hahahaha, lmfao
I sell weed, but we know you won't buy, this tricks wack
I'd sell you some strong herb, but even that would kick your ass
>haha
And ya, I went 88, but still didn't match you or your lame lines
Cuz to match you...
...I'd have to ghost, pre-write, and go over the line limit at the same time
>HAHAHAHA oh shit, nice (14)


so overall, i vote JTR, just because he was more consistent with his lines...i thought mimesis was a drag, the first part of his verse was aight, but just was stating obious....JTR's was insightful and incorporated much more complexity with his dissing....he was creative and imaginative at the same time, using that to his advantage creating personals and punches....like the end of JTR's verse i laughed at the most......so this is a pretty indeph description....v/JTR. yeah

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