Aigghhh
beats dope
Triple,you really moulded this verse,fellin your delivery,the differences in your voice really works,feeling your emotion,im relaly feeling this verse,the lryics are out of this world
Hook is dope,feeling the differences in the voices
Inter:
your first verse is koo,the lyrics mould it,your emotion could be upped in this verse,your breath control has elevated so much,first thing i noticed,i couldnt do this,it flows so smooth..really feeling your smooth/laid back delivery on this,its like this beat is made for you,the quality could be upped,but get a new mic
lol
Aight your 2nd verse(3rd):the emotion is noticabally imrpoved this verse,with your delivery again as smooth as a babys ass cheeks lol,the lyrics are good,your presence is off the hook in this track,i unno,you got that smooth delivery,reminds me of sum1,cant put my finger on it though.....
Overall:
Triple verse 1:8/10
Hook:10/10,dope
Inter first verse:8/10
Hook....
Inter second verse:9/10...wy better
Overall:35/40
Good shit!
Feed used 2/6/06 "This Is My Time"