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Old 02-05-06, 12:27 PM   #8
trakk*star
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vocals r too loud.............rattlin tha speakerz.....................

flows oon and good though..................................

deleiverys good too..........................................

i love this beat can u hook me up wit it????

emotion couldbe upped alot doesnt sound like u feelin it......................

pressence is there.............................

lyrics were nice................but i didnt feel hook found it was bland............

overall this was an ight track............first of yers ive peeped........................

7/10 need sum elevation...........but overall pretty decent.........holla at me wit dat beat if u got aim
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