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Old 02-05-06, 01:53 PM   #17
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Voted For: Tha 1 An Onlii B

Vote- Tha 1 An Onlii B

First off, having a few explainations is great, but don't have them be longer than your verses...I thought this battle was a little weak, but it was close. Both catz had some flow structure problems, so neither was better than the other...Both went heavy with Personals, and that's good, but don't just quote other people and take what they said to use on someone. The only decent personal in the battle, I thought, was in Tha 1 an Onlii B's last line...creativity. So he took Personals. Graffics and takin' what others said is cool, but not when your whole drop depends on it. JC Real took Multis, basically because he had them. No wordplay in this battle what-so-ever. Punches were taken By Tha 1 and Onlii, just barely. Neither cat had incredible punches, but I thought that some of JC's stuff was forced. Onlii's punches were basic, but more effective, in my opinion.

So there ya have it. Keep workin' on shit.
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