It's alright. Would have come together a LOT more better if it was less monochromatic, aside from the little color you see through the door. I feel you used way too many dark areas and it makes it seem like you're hiding areas as if the job couldn't be pulled off well.

The first part of the piece my eye notices flaw is where the curb and street meet. It's too unrealistic. and flat. No depth at all.

Other than that, it's a pretty decent manipulation. There are some decent heads on this site, who do work other than sigs and I like that.