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Old 02-06-06, 05:04 AM   #14
LADY_LYRICAL
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yer i liked this piece,,, flowed nicely,,,as mentioned above ^^
the hook was creativ therefore catchy
need a bit mor higher volcab use

overall yer ...liked it

xcept one thing........... we mor need posts on deep stuff like worldy issues/problems/urself
insted of tht classic, imma do this imma do that.....which cn get borin frm time to tym

overall , u gt this in tight ,,,,,,,, uppin for a 8.6
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