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Old 02-06-06, 11:58 AM   #36
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Voted For: Jay .Reaper.

He's gonna get hits to the Chest like a human Bong
his Gurl like Tv's...Even 3 year olds can turn her on
it would be shady to See this slim kid in public wit kim
Cuz when hes Gone............no-ones gonna be like Y.M
So SHootin aint Ur SHit Besides Watchin THe Star's
like Homers Spot In-flamed..I'm Burin Down mo's Bar's
Ima carpenter this bitch...nail him wit the hammer
Cuz his moms like screen doors...anyone can slam her

VS.

Get ya SKULL BROKE WIT A TORN NECK, I'LL THROW HOLES IN THIS BOYS CHEST 'Split you in half' and BLOW SMOKE IN YA MOIST BREAST lookin like 'Alley Mcbeal' had her Gynecologist' used a 'GOAL POST' AS HER 'FORCEPS'!!!//


Yeah, this was one-sided. Most likely because of the fact that Young Money's structure was fucking horrible. That shit is the kind of shit for audio battles, but in text you need to work a different structure otherwise your verse just seems bullshit. That first bar of yours was ok, kind of funny but nothing special. Phil had a few decent bars that made me laugh, nothing spectacular but they were mildly amusing. Overall, he had a verse that looked decent and had some actual punches. Young Money came with a load of shit talk really, stuff I've seen before.....nothing creative and delivered and worded terribly.

V/ - Phil Benjamin
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