Thread: My First Drop on RV
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Old 02-07-06, 08:06 AM   #10
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Originally Posted by LexiKon
You contradicted yourself you said you dont like people who dont own a gun but the gat might cock and then you said you grab the mag and kill emcees...? You ain't never cought no bodys. It didnt flow right to me maybe i was readin it wrong. Elevate.


true story .... keep workin on your writins
this was an overall iight piece .. with a good concept that still could use sum work .. but on sum places i juss got lost .. keep elevating mayne ..
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