who made this beat???? its pretty good.... that effect on the hook is sooooooooo bait, needs takin off, its an ok hook i guess, verses are ok.. flow at time is good then at times it sounds robotic and awkward and u seem to "start... spit...tin.. like...this" and a couple of lines you run out of breath, that accent throws me though man, it sounds forced and fake, i dunno cos u say its ur natural accent, but it just sounds so awkward.... quality is good, just the effect on the hook kills it... instead of adding bad effects like that, try recording your hook twice and getting them in sync, and then pan one right by about 30 and then pan the other one left by about 30 and then double up the rhymes in the hook and keep them central but still sitting in the background nicely n farely quiet so they dont over power.... that should work, thats what i normally do and it keeps the hook sounding clean but makes it sit seperate from the verses if u get wat i mean.

ur improving though man, keep it up.. peace.

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