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Old 02-07-06, 03:52 PM   #13
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Voted For: Venture

hmmmm T-Dot's opener is forced because avy and see is clearly a forced rhyme... How big is you're vocabulary couldn't you of just used another word or just worded it differently so that it atleast looked like a clean rhyme? ... but it's not like Venture's verse didn't have any obvious flaws either... what does being saddled have to do with falling short? hmmmm nothing at all... so what was supposed to be a punch amounts to just filler...

Still Venture did have the better verse, better concepts, better flow... in a lacl luster battle over all...
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