I Chill in Asylums
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IP:
Nice, not bad man. The only thing i really had a problem with was that the lines were a lil long for me. I saw a few multies thrown in here which is good. The flow was ok, but like i said i felt that the lines were too long. The imagery was cool but u might wanna increase ur vocab a little bit. Please rtf on Runnin' or All I Need, links in my sig. Peace.
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