Voted For: Rapper

my latest hold... is on this rap, you'll have to pay for votes
cuz we only take you "lightly", no matter which "weigh" you go
i'll give him hell, my lock over mike could never fail
gettin popped, or fried tha only time "macs" would ever sell
like Sosa, im a big hitter so you dont wanna start shit
man, you tha king of litter, cuz you always droppin garbage
this kid was neva a gangsta... ima tell you why he gay...
the only time he from tha hood is when he droppin in his PJ's

okay flow got ur point across in a few lines,better punches,overall better structure, okay wordplay
score=6/10





Bitch nigga better get my name right, best know that I'm always mackin
You an e-thug, so blatent, like you 50 in a soap opera, shit you bad actin
No point in droppin ya verses nigga, win for me will come quick
My times wasted droppin verses on lil man, like money invested in a trick
No effort needed, I just take one breath ya shits gone in like a twig in the air
Verses so lethal, went ahead gone homicidal, crime scene was ya comp chair
You garbage nigga, neva be good, best peep that shit and don't get it twisted
Punches had it like ya verses was doin they own porno, as-whole fisted
Out my sight with all that bull crap, I could tell by ya name you a cracker
Ya verses a fortune tella, yessin my questions, like 'Could you get any wacker?'
Tired of all these crackers, can't rap, register tryin to battle, seein it to often
All acceptin battles with me, ain't knowin steppin up I'ma put them in they coffin
What mo can I say bout this nigga, this bitch a rapper, without the delight
As my verses walk all ova this nigga, watch this no show get stomped on like he in a fight
Lyrical beatdown bitch, only thing left for you to do is retire like hova
It's all lights out for you nigga, ya career done kid it's game ova
I'm puttin ya in a state of depression, lyrics slavin you like the holocaust
Now watch this pussy read my verse, then decline the battle, knowin he lost...

okay verse work on personals and sturcture they were your major downfall punches was not hard could come better,cut down the lines to much to read if u got a lot keep the readers attention
score5/10


overall aight battle nuttin to spectacular both could have came much harder but rapper go it return the favor at one of the battles in my sig

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