the chorus at the begginin wasnt realli that good....Trakk star has a Good rapping Voice but needs to get my Lyrical... not bad verse tho

as for Snypa i could u hear u Clearly...u sound like ur tryna be another eminem (No hate) but no one realli gets Violent now of dayz...its ok....ur good tho just work on it a lil bit...like speats said i like the original better then this sorry....keep tryn tho...

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