A steel rumble, thunder clouds peel
I like the feel of dicks in my buts for real.
^The fuck? lol

Victim of circumstance is Sam the Libra.
Wrapped down now in black and white slash,
the hunt's contradict is new attack... The Zebra.
^Nice

My life in poetic aesthetics was never regretted,
I am a phonetic weapon neglected by my brethren.
^Cool

Part of the golden cycle is to divide men
who tend to end up in the lions den;
^Cool again

Those were just some of the lines that stood out to me..This had great flow all throughout..pretty nice imagery..I felt Atticus could have down a little better though..structure was good for atticus all...good drop.

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