i dont like this beat, too cheasy for me... not my thing but ill look past that, flow is cool but theres times u drop suttin slower/faster the rest i dont like the way u have big pauses in between some stuff, yeh quality is off... ur presence and delivery is good though, lyrics serve there purpose but are abit basic... hook is ok, yeman pretty cool shit, mainly im not feeling it cos its not my style but u got good abilities on a mic so cnt knock that.