That's the course they used for the Superbowl commercials on NFL Network... but I fucked with it then and still fuck with it now... so on to the verses... the 1st verse was cool till the second half where the flow just derailed, and you used "I" way too much... your structure got sloppy right there too... On ya next couple verses it seemed like you kinda changed topics and started complaining about shit... it got a lil annoying I had to force myself to continue to read... Structurally the verses were sound but the content wasn't as polished as the 1st verse... the last verse you still complained a lil but it got a lot better content wise... over all this was an aight drop

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