Keep the wisdom flowing; I'm Scared of the narrow minded class,
So I keep a local Library so intelligence doesn't smolder into ash,
Passing Jack and Jill tipping my crown handing them a pail,
Pouring soda in my cup licking the foam off the Holy Grail,
Erotic rhythms rock the floor as I put my head to the ground,
Exotic dancing with Mother Earth with a rose in my mouth,
I talk to doves in the trees so please there’s no need to panic,
Staring upon the mortals laying face down on my hammock,
I vowed to keep the mind growing with stanzas spoken aloud,
Stroking my feather pen along the canvas built in the clouds
I spend my thinking time underwater next to my treasure chest,
Talking to Mermaids about the meaning of life when I’m stressed
I glide amongst cranes flocking together as they teach,
Sitting lost in the sands of time drawing sun dials on the beach.


those lines were the best...you had some cheesy shit in there for sure, lol, but if everything was writtin as vivid, concise, and imaginative as these....wow, this woulda killed...still was awesome, good fucking job man, good fucking job

I vowed to keep the mind growing with stanzas spoken aloud,
Stroking my feather pen along the canvas built in the clouds,

i think that was my favourite...and the closer, fuckin ill, lol...keep up

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