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Old 02-09-06, 04:47 PM   #20
Calypso
£ivin a £yfe of Çrhyme
 
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Voted For: Tech Skillz

Tech

Poppin This Kid Out The Package More Than Strugglin With Mento's
His Rhymes Ain't Bitten, They Just Hand Me Downs.....
..In Other Words, Rentals!-Not to bad of an opener 7/10
You Can't Aim, Your Gun Pointin Out Of The Picture In This Battle
See You Got Two Balls In Your Throat.....
.....But Neither One's Your Adams Apples-haha, made me laugh 9/10
You Look Like Me Why? Cause Your Mom Let Me Bless Your Seed
Either He Gone.or.he.a.....
....Pussy With More Hits Than S.T.D's!-lol another good one 8/10
You Be Running, But You'll Never Glimpse Me Trying To Run And Hide
For The Only Time I Limp........
....Would Be From Granting Your Mom A Piggie Back Ride!-decent closer, coulda been better but still good 7/10

Overall:31/40
Feedback:Good Drop, a few lines made me laugh, some good punches

John

'll leave ya strategies revealed and then sonned, killed him for fun
Tech Skillz?....Even ya name shows you only hold the skills of a gun-good opener, decent personal 7/10
'Mildew ya lungs' like 'Breathin Bacteria'..please get back, hear me, bruh?
you'll leave wit snapped ears because ya keys got smacked serious-Good Multi's but didnt understand the end to the bar 7/10
You'll lose wit ease and act furious, for thinkin ya cerebral's superior
when Im done, even "in your nightmares, you'll scream"...
....like "havin dreams of hysteria"..-good bar, one of your best in the battle 8/10
Who thinks this dude is ill? Naw, he's just under confusion still
for thinkin he'll beat me, cause if I "stopped practicing"...
....thats the only way Im "Losing, Skillz"..-good punch coulda made it better 8/10
When your improvement builds, then come back for redemtion
this cats just a misfit, who got mislead to tryna clash with the sickest-really weak...you woulda been better off to leave this out 5/10
Stop tryin to see me in this game cause you'll easily get maimed
RV peeped all of your verses...
....and the only "skills from you we seen" is "in your name"...-Good closer, liked the personal 8/10

Overall:43/60
Feedback:it was kinda hard to read with your structure, try to fix that...your 5th bar had to be the weakest one in your drop...shoulda just left it out would of been better off without it...good multis and personals at time, then you slacked off

Vote:Thought this was pretty close, you came hard for someone new to the site Hendricks and i liked your drop at times...but im gonna have to give it to Tech for better rhyme scheme and structure
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