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For the most part this was well worded... there were a few times the structure fell off... looks like you drop in a 1 bar = 2 lines style... which is cool to each his own... Lyrically this was sound not sure it that's cut into to short verses or one extra long one... this could work as a poem too... anyway keep doing what you do... 1
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