Like your battle verses theres a lot of multis and a few stand alone hott sections in this... but your structure is flawed... the syallabels do not match up right... some of your multies are just flat out forced... the begining of this was very ocwardly worded... this looks like it wouldn't fit a beat correctly... in text it might pass... in audio you're gonna need ta fix spots... over all this was a cool spit though... keep doing what you do... 1

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