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Old 02-10-06, 06:17 PM   #32
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Voted For: MaRVOLOUSJay

You've never seen anyone like me, 'cuz you can't clone men
But I've never seen anyone like you, 'cuz you have no friends
an ok opener.....
And that's the truth, you act pimpish like you're chasin' tail
Always gettin' mad bitches...
...to let you paint their nails
nice punch
I'll Break your frail frame and leave you lookin' like "blah"
Even fishermen are impressed by the hook I'll put in your jaw
ehhh...it's ok
Cookin' that raw? NO, you're not a hustler since birth?
Want my 2 cents?
Of course, because it's double your worth
nice....pretty good punchline
I'll fuck with a jerk, even if I'm not a dangerous man
You fuck with a jerk, and KY jelly layed on your hand
lol....funny shit
So drop the thug charade, bustin' glocks does not concern me
Besides...
Your rap acting is so bad you make Belly look Oscar-worthy
ehhh....not so good of closer....

This verse was ok, seen way better from you 9th....could have had some better wording on some things but it did have a few laughs in there



da sickest? nah u a liar slut....couldn't be a thug u got no kind of guts.
9th's gay his 'alias' 2 cuzz only MEN..........& RiDE ON FiRE TRUCK.*
nice personal...good pucnh as well
rite now u probly in shock scared holdin ya face,pussy! i know dat ya fake.
you a nobody dat everyone 'sleeps' on..ya rv boys wont even show 2 ya WaKE.
not really feelin this bar......maybe wording was wrong
............uhh his flow suck's money he get from a record? i'd say around a g.
but on rv us mc's are like 'drop out's' we dont GiVE a FUCK aBOUT DEGREE.
lmao......that last line was the shit...funny ass shit
hate's on in most my battles..why? cuzz dis bitch know dis vet spit it so well.
he 'check's in' 4 rv battle's in da future he just gon work at a 'DESK iN a HOTEL'.
not feeling this bar
lol sorri strobe but i gota X dis memeber..he stil gon be on here by next december.
9th's has no sense of humor he's up tight so we dont KiD around like a sex offender.
lmao....nice hit....good wordplay
would talk about ya moms but DRaKEL a get mad so i'll pass on da teethless hore.
believe it dog and u only 'a head of ya time' cuzz u were born PREMaTURE.
nice punch jay and good closer


well this battle was pretty good...but overall jay had some funny bars and some good personals as well. 9th you lacked stuff in a few places....some punches could have been worded better but still a good verse......good battle

rtf in my battle against tavarez
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