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Old 02-10-06, 10:25 PM   #4
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This was pretty nice, lyrics were good for ur first drop betta than most newcomers in my opinion. The vocab and flow was cool, but i kno u can get better. The structure was good too. Not bad for ur first drop, but keep writing man. Please rtf on All I Need, links in my sig.
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