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hmmmm this was aight... structure was kinda fucked up... still flowed nicely... nice imagery, and emotion... You put us right inside the character's head... *nods* good shit... coulda been a lil more drawn out for more detail... but over all this was decent... RTF reply to anything I have posted... OM, song, or battle... 1
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