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Old 02-11-06, 02:00 PM   #20
J.D
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Voted For: Young Un...

yo yo, im givin this one to young un, cause his punchlines were alot more complex. knuckels i actually did really like ya verse, you had sum real nice multis and ya flow was killer, but this is battlin, so you gotta have the punchlines aswell, to back it up, and most of ya punchlines were pretty basic. ya multi part in the middle was decent though, "....ya holdin nuthin but a cock in ya hand".

young un had some real nice punchlines, such as the spul poster line, and the "You couldnt come hard if diamonds shot out your penis" line hahaha, them lines actually made me laugh lol.

this was close, but young un had a better battle verse in my opinion, and hit harder with his punchlines. you had a good verse aswell though knuckels i like ya style nd i was feelin ya flow etc, just work on gettin more complex punchlines.........


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