The beat is pretty good, nice and mellow with a great vibe to it. first thing I noticed was that you have a decent sound but your voice blends to much. Idk what the problem is but it's hard to understand you, it's not your pronounceation but it's something else. turn the vocal volume up a bit maybe I'm not sure man. your verses are ok but like when you do adlibs and shit thats when it's effected most, you should turn down the adlib volume a bit or give them a different effect to amke them sound different. your lyrics were very good, and the storyline was very to the point. the hook was decent, I thought it coulda been better but it's alright.

rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=221910

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