There was too much dead air between the hook and the first verse...should have ad libbed it


1st cat...vocals are clear but needs more presence, IMO....dub them or amp them


flow is good


there needs to be talking or adlibbing between the verses...it sounds hella empty


2nd verse...sounds expressive...good flow...could stand for more vocal presence though


UNF...flow is good


str8 verse


good collab...just needed some filler in between the verses



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