I liked this, it was nice. I believe u handled the topic well, not many people write something like this. Ur vocab was really nice and the structure i liked to especially since it is under a pic. The content was ok, i think u could of given more detail. The flow was a little bit off in my opinion. Maybe u could shorten ur lines a little bit and might work better. But good drop overall, keep it man. Please rtf on one of the links in my sig, thanks. Peace.