Voted For: .Merkage.

Element: you didnt have shit in this verse. this was horrible. no punchez, no personalz, even if you attempted they didnt hit. work on making a real verse.

fokuss: some conceptz were aight, some werent. this verse was ok overall, not the best ive ever read, but not the worse. just keep postin.

v- fokuss

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