Alright You Want Feed About Your Verse

The Intro Took Too Long Personally Though

The Actual Lyrics Were Nice,Had Some Good Punchlines Lol@The Erect Line,Your Emotion Was Koo,One Thing Though...Try And Work On Your Breath Control A Lil....You Seem Confident Enough...Although I Felt The Presence Dipped In A Few Places,Try Work On That Dawg,You Seemed Agressive,Which Was Good For A Diss Track...Like You Really Meant It,Nah Mean?,The Delivery As I Said Was Agressive,But Try And Get This On All Of Your Tracks Cause I Heard Some Others..If You Get Everything Like This,Your Set....The FLow Was Good,Even Without A Beat,It Was Like Each Line Was The Same N Shit,

Overall Good Shit...I Think Its A Lil Weird Without A Beat...But It Doesnt Ruin The Track..Its Actually Quite Good


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