this beat is soooooooooooooo played first: flow is ok at times its all over the place, delivery needs upping, lyrics weak, not feeling this, quality is off... some of ur lines u breath before uve finished the last word, second verse: flow is better, delivery is better both could still be tightened up, lyrics are ok, flow falls off really bad a couple of times... quality again is off.... all in all theres alot of work to be done, but not bad, potential is there, keep it up. pz.