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Old 02-14-06, 03:26 PM   #7
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Black Poet
 
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From: London
IP:

Sup HD this was sic and it flowed well nice,.. opener was nice good delivery
strc was a bit choppy but alright,. good use of vocab, close was good...

I did like this bar:

Fuck peace, HD just loves the crowd's violence
Only when ya dead do I want ta hear silence

I felt it could have been worded differently but the imaginary was nice.

Stay up fams

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