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Old 02-14-06, 09:20 PM   #9
J Summers
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aight aight aight...

not bad... i like your voice its mad dif but its dope as hell

chorus has crazy potential if you woulded worded things better it may have flowed so much better and been butter but still dope as hell

first verse is good,, real lyrical missed beat a couple times but was fuckin dope, prolly the best out of all of them second one just fell like you fell of a bit and the talkin in the end well thats whatever for theese cats on r.v. bro dat shit was like 8.5/10 not bad young stay up and hit my shit up when i get it on there
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