Voted For: ThatNigga

Illist: decent read, made me laugh a little...but ive seen one of those lines used before...im not sayin you bit, it was just not new. good flow, the structure was wack tho. but structure dont determine W's...punches do, yours were aight. good punches, but none really seemed to relate. but like i said, decent read.

young law: hmm stretched and blown, but new and original. i like the opener. the close was aight. yea it flowed decently, but you structure was wack as well..but fuck it, your punches related, and hit well...so your takin it.

vote: young law...

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