New to RV
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nice poetry/rap fosho
Adam's Apple's Choked In And A Shadow's Reopened
Canoe A River Of Death While My Paddle Is Broken
plenty of nice mettas
Hold strong like vices, no evading, outside of shading heavy in deep voids
Ever present in the essence of hope, don’t cope know one’s forever damned
i lost the rhyme scheme a few times and thought a few rhymes was forced a lil
but altogether this is a strong piece..with lots of conceptual matter going down
yeah coo writing..HD used long lines... good still
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