That isnt very good feedback leave better feedback next time but yeah ill still give you feedback

this was a pretty decent drop coming from a new comer i was really feeling the emotions and feeling that was going on.. the structure was also good but to me the style sorta changed in verse 2 =/ ,but yeah it was a pretty good overall drop next time try and shorten your bars..and get your thought across to the reader using the least amount of words.

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