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Old 02-18-06, 11:35 AM   #5
Indeph
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Ok let's see..

I think this drop had it's on and offs, but It was enjoyable. The opening line kind of got to me cause I wonder that sometimes too. On some of the lines the rhyme scheme would be really basic. Like 'blessed us with, stressed us with' could of used a more complex form of rhyming, but it was coo. Overall it was nice to see you dropping something spiritual, and the flow in this was good from what I read. Good job and shit.
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