Pretty Good song wit Yayo and Joe, *waits for MadKnight to come in*....
Ight, your vocals should be turned up a little, they dont match the volume of Yayo. Who ever did the cutting of the instrumental and the real song, needed to take their time, because it was very poorly done. It sounds like you was just reading off a piece of paper, because you was stretching the sylabals in your lines in order to stay on point. Pretty good job, but you need to add more variety in your sentence structure.
7/10 - could have been better if you took your time cutting the instrumental and the song together...it was really choppy
rtf
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