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Old 02-18-06, 01:35 PM   #3
Acuity
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the face you have cut and placed underneath that brush layer just looks soooooooooo unproffesional. The top of the head just looks sloppy and amateur. The subtext "constantly ceating chaos" cud b resized so the C doesnt touch the y falling down from the above text for clarity. Im not feelin the brick-esque type squares, can see what u wanted to do but it just seems too random, maybe balanced wid a similar image at the top of the cover or at a reduced opacity..the fact ur even using the word "portfolio" means your doing this for something of decent standard. Often portfolio covers that impress are those that are completely original or those that refelct ur style.
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