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Old 02-19-06, 11:15 AM   #5
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dope verse. Good wordplay the imagery was pretty good. Not much emotion but then again thats hard to do with the topic you chose. Ive seen better from you but yet ive seen worse also. Good verse in all.


Overall: 6.5/10


Ion W Yuu:

Good verse from you as well more than i expected. But your verse lacked the emotion. It was like you had the plot in mind but the words didnt come together well. The woprdplay was good and the spots where you used imagery was good but your verse just wasnt consistent enough

Overall: 6/10


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